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Taking deep breaths,
Breathing you in
Your scent so sweet
Like dew on the grass

Or freshly baked cookies
Lingering below my nostrils
Tempting me to lean in
The kiss we’ve both been

Dying to try
Your lips so smooth
So perfect
Stretched in to a smile

That lasts for days
Your eyes are screaming
Kiss me, kiss me
Oh God, please kiss me

Leaning in, is perfection
The sun is out
Warming our skin
Your back is soft

Like silk, a bead spread, a quilt
You hold me tighter
Pull me closer
Don’t break the bond

We’re sharing
Early this summer morning
You’re amazing
But you’re awful

And I’m taking deep breaths
Breathing you in
Your scent is ravishing
I just can’t walk away

From your smile
From your eyes
From the scruff on your face
That shows you’ve been

Awake for days
Not sleeping, only thinking
Of this moment
Of exactly how this would play out

Just like a movie
It’s perfection in my eyes
And eventually we let go
Because the real world

Well, it calls to us
One last kiss, so soft, so sweet
And your eyes are smiling
In to my soul

As I breathe you in
And you linger on
Slowly just letting go
Until tomorrow comes.
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:icontrinityismygoddess:
I don't dislike it, in fact it's quite good...but you haven't really seemed to grow too much as a writer since highschool. It's still fabulous, but I want you to take it a step further.

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kiss me.

~StepOutandBeYourself *Prose-R-Us
:iconbloodofaunicorn:
I haven't really been writing much since high school, honestly. I just really haven't had the time, haha. But thank you.

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We are the middle children of history. We have no Great War, no Great Depression. Our Great War is a spiritual one, our Great Depression is our lives. We've been raised by TV sets, and slowly we're learning the truth, and we're very, very pissed off.
:icontrinityismygoddess:
Makes sense to me. :) I haven't written nearly as much as I would've liked to have since high school, but I hope to really get back into it asap.

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kiss me.

~StepOutandBeYourself *Prose-R-Us

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